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Icka! M. Chif ([info]mischif) wrote,
@ 2009-03-30 02:41:00

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Current mood: silly
Entry tags:magic kaito

[Magic Kaito] The Bait
Title: The Bait
Author: Icka! M. Chif
Word Count: 232
Rating: General
Author Notes: Curse you Ellen Brand.
Summary: ”He went for it.”




Sneak.

Sneak.

Sneak.

The Kaitou Kid slunk through the shadows like a sneaky thing towards his goal. In the wings, Nakamori-keibu, Hakuba and the Task Force waited with bated breath as they watched him, poised and ready to spring their trap.

Kid suddenly froze, twitching slightly like a dog on the scent of something really juicy. He changed direction and scurried off in another direction.

”He went for it.” Nakamori-keibu whispered in a tone of pure disbelief.

”Of course.” Hakuba clenched his fists in victory. “It’s shiny.”

”But-“

”Shh.” One of the other officers nudged them, cutting them off before they could startle their prey.

The Kid paused in front of a isolated display case, the shiny contents reflecting in the low light. He made a slight whimpering noise, shuffling an ever narrowing spiral closer to the case.

”Wait for it…” Nakamori-keibu whispered.

Kid made another whimpering noise, hands reaching up to grab his hair. “But…” He whinged, practically dancing back and forth. He scuffled forward, reaching for it, then back, circling the display before doing it again, the entire Task Force on pin needles as they waited to see if he’d take the bait.

Finally Kid froze, deliberately putting his hands to his sides. “No.” He said firmly. “It’s not on the heist list.” He turned his back on the glimmering prize and walked away, after the jewel he’d announced he was after.

”Dammit.” Hakuba muttered. “So close.” It should have been the perfect lure.

Nakamori-keibu growled in return, handing Hakuba a 500 yen coin. “What’d you use?”

”Cadbury Crème Egg.” Hakuba shrugged, putting the coin in his pocket. “The combination of chocolate and shiny foil should have been irresistible.”

-fin-


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[info]ladynero
2009-03-30 10:34 am UTC (link)
*cackles* oh what a lovely way to start a Monday. Thank you Icka.

*snerks* Cadbury Creme Egg.....

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[info]kiritsu
2009-03-30 12:06 pm UTC (link)
*snickers*
The mental images are very amusing.
I'll make my sorry attempts at drawing them during class to keep myself entertained. Should any of them turn out to actually be decent, I'll let you see.

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[info]purplevks1717
2009-03-30 02:04 pm UTC (link)
Hee! I can see why Hakuba thought Kid would go for it. <3 (I certainly can't resist them.)

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YES!!!!
(Anonymous)
2009-03-30 07:02 pm UTC (link)
Beautiful, absolutly beautiful!!!!!!

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[info]kittyshinju
2009-03-30 10:29 pm UTC (link)
Somehow I'm certain that this sudden Hakuba and Kaito torture is all your fault. I BLAME YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER!!!
To Catch The Kaitou Kid

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[info]kittyshinju
2009-03-31 07:08 am UTC (link)
maybe they should try making a foil covered chocolate replica of the heist gem next time. :D

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[info]morgan_idril
2009-03-31 12:45 am UTC (link)
Whooop!! It should have worked, it should have worked. Well it does mean Kid has a good sense of self preservation.

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[info]marsdejahthoris
2009-03-31 05:52 pm UTC (link)
Ahem... MUAHAHAHAAHA! I'm a plunnie generator, what can I say? *snickers* I'm glad to see somebody right this, I always thought it was a great image. Kaito's such a ferret sometimes.

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(Anonymous)
2009-04-02 03:27 am UTC (link)
ORZ

Hakuba should offer Kaito one of those when he's out of costume. I don't think the egg (or Hakuba) would stand a chance.

I prefer the caramel ones myself

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[info]joisbishmyoga
2009-04-04 07:14 pm UTC (link)
Dammit. My Kidmuse spotted this and is now chortling things about chocolate diamonds.

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*cackles a lot*
[info]waywren
2009-04-05 05:10 pm UTC (link)
Man, if anything would get him, you'd think it'd be that. Maybe if it'd been caramel?

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LJ-lurker Hydok here to poke you with a spork. Or something...
(Anonymous)
2009-04-06 03:06 pm UTC (link)
The Kaitou Kid slunk through the shadows like a sneaky thing towards his goal.

*dies*
Epic. Win.

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[info]gemininus.livejournal.com
2009-04-09 01:45 am UTC (link)
W-wow...Hakuba needs to tease Kid now.

...*collapses*

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Randomness
(Anonymous)
2009-04-09 01:56 pm UTC (link)
And just to be random, I had to say that at the bottom of the story where it has the 'Ads by Google', it was for the "Chocolate Apothecary, chocolate bars, dark, milk and white, world-sourced chocolate gifts". I know it was a random thing, but I thought it was just perfect for the story and made me laugh even more. XD

- Skit

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[info]youko_rayah
2009-04-18 09:02 pm UTC (link)
just so as ya know, this about killed me. I can see Kid doing the "sneak" thing (I have the image of him tip-toeing along like something out of an old Scooby-Doo cartoon with his hands up near his chest, you know the pose)

and the chocolate? and the shinny? and the "No. It’s not on the heist list." was too good.

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(Anonymous)
2009-04-20 11:55 am UTC (link)
A magican I know in RL, LOVES cadbury eggs. *laughs* Somehow that makes this even funnier to me.

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